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This article has reached GA status not too long ago, and I would like to nominate to FA status eventually. I have become more confident with my prose, but I'm still a little iffy as to whether it meets the featured article criteria. I would like some feedback on the current state of the article, and some suggestions on how to improve it.
Thanks, —DAP388 (talk) 17:49, 27 May 2012 (UTC)
Comments
- " the group finally " who's "the group"? For this to standalone as an FA, we need to understand what "the group" means.
- Any reason why "Daryl Dixon" is redlinked in the infobox?
- "and a 3.4 rating in" as a Brit, I have no idea whatsoever what that means.
- "highest-rated telecast in its first season." context? In the US?
- "walkers" you need to explain the zombie apocalypse you mention in the lead is directly relevant to the word "walker".
- "which Rick agrees to" -> "to which Rick agrees."
- "such as showers and wine," -> "such as taking showers and drinking wine..."
- Not sure we really need to link "suicide" or "rape" in an article in English Wikipedia, pretty common terms.
- "but is unsuccessful" perhaps just me but it's an odd turn of phrase when referring to a failed rape attempt.
- " to 8 hours after" eight.
- "if it can't power" avoid contractions.
- Don't force image sizes (other than lead images), so portrait images should be
thumb|uprightand landscape should bethumbonly. - Don't think you need "pictured" in an image caption.
- " ultimately explodes shortly thereafter" either ultimately or shortly thereafter, both not required.
- "The opening and concluding scenes of "TS-19" are reminiscent..." maybe note that "It has been noted that.." or similar since you're stating a kind of opinion here.
- Apparently New York Daily News is actually just Daily News (from New York)...
- Time Inc. has no comma.
- Wall Street Journal has a The included.
- Check ref titles meet WP:DASH.