Wikipedia:Peer review/Tent pegging/archive1

Tent pegging

I should be grateful for your constructive criticisms of my article on tent pegging. In particular, I should be interested to receive views on whether I have adequately described the distinction between tent pegging as a specific game and tent pegging as a class of sports. - Tilting 15:56, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

My general impression is, that while the page looks decent, it seems overly brief. I'm sure there is more content that could be added that would be of interest to a visitor. Also it is in need of incline citations and there are a number of terms that could be wiki-linked. Thank you. — RJH (talk) 16:29, 30 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your comments and suggestions. I have added more wiki links and created footnotes to verify the more important pieces of information. - Tilting 20:03, 31 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]