Wikipedia:Peer review/The Dark Fields/archive1

The Dark Fields

I've listed this article for peer review because I have expanded the content significantly and would like to hear the community's appraisal of my work.

Thanks, Eddie morra brian (talk) 18:10, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

Comments by Tintor2 (talk) 16:07, 21 May 2016 (UTC)

Hello Eddie. The article looks good but there are somethings bothering me.

1. Try expanding the lead to mention other stuff such as the premise and other stuff. Normally, well-written articles have two paragraphs in the lead.
2. Could you make a reception section? Sales would be good.
3. The Film adaptation section feels like WP:Original research. Maybe you could trim it and leave it like a legacy section alongside tv spin off.
4. One last thing, the making of the novel (inspirations, author's comments) could be helpful.

Other than that, I also made a peer review in Wikipedia:Peer review/Allen Walker/archive1 and I would appreciate feedback.

• More sources are needed. Try:
  • THE DARK FIELDS. By: Zaleski, Jeff. Publishers Weekly. 11/19/2001, Vol. 248 Issue 47, p48
  • Time Is 'Limitless.' By: GLYNN, ALAN. Publishers Weekly. 5/16/2011, Vol. 228 Issue 20, p76
  • No Glamour Backstage, No-Frills Trading Room. New York Times. 1/13/2002, Vol. 151 Issue 51997, Section 14 p5
  • The Dark Fields (Book). By: Kaufman, King. New York Times Book Review. 3/3/2002, p16. --maclean (talk) 04:37, 11 July 2016 (UTC)