Wikipedia:Peer review/The High and the Mighty (film)/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because it is a comprehensive and thoroughly researched film article that is written in a neutral but encyclopedia manner.
Thanks, Bzuk (talk) 14:09, 4 March 2008 (UTC).
SGGH I suggest:
- move citation one to the end of the sentence.
- I would put the plot summary in the lead before the part about John Wayne and the oscars, which I would have at the end of the lead.
- The image caption, (from a screenshot) is not, I don't think, necessary
"souls on board" I can't find a reason for this phrase other than it being a quote from something, couldn't it just be passengers?ahh I see now, but perhaps explain that at the first mention of "souls on board"- Passengers needs a colon after it
- With each character name in bold, and each actors name not wikilinked, and with the text coming out straight after, it can be difficult in casual reading to pick out the actors names, perhaps highlight them some way.
- From cite 4 in the plot section until the cast section there are no citations, you may have left something uncited that needs to be.
- Good use of images
- "Casting problems plagued the production" is there a cite for this or is it in the [7] citing the following sentence.
- Bob Cummings, the "Bob" doesnt need the "" I don't think
- risky "theme" concept project, again with the "" this is a bit difficult to understand, why the ""?
The remainder seems fine, good stuff. Hope you find these comments helpful. SGGH speak! 12:11, 16 March 2008 (UTC)