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I've listed this article for peer review because I think there's still some more work to do here, and I'd like feedback as to where it stands at this moment!
Thanks, Tobymsinger (talk) 18:05, 6 November 2018 (UTC)
- Not a bad start.
- As an English play, WP:ENGVAR means it should use British English, so "theatre" for a start.
- The Summary section should at least be referenced with Acts & scenes.
- It doesn't really cover much beyond a summary & the anti-semitic issue, but there is a good deal more to the play than that. Specific papers on one angle are fine, but need to be balanced with more sources covering the work overall.
- It was not performed much at all for a long time after Kean, but then quite a bit in the 20th century. You should add from this good source (on the performance history & other things).
- You might look at this edit, in 2016, by another student. Some babies might have been thrown out with the bathwater.
- But a decent start.