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Tila Tequila

Me and several others have been working on this article for awhile now. I was just wondering what changes or additions to this piece would anyone suggest? Thanks in advance for the feedback, by the way. ― LADY GALAXY ★彡 ^Refill^/^lol 05:25, 21 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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