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This is my first video game article, so I want to make sure this article improves as much as possible. I'm a bit concerned with the gameplay and development sections (the gameplay section has a "clarification needed" tag sitting there).

Thanks, Tarantula^TM (speak with me) (my legacy) 21:20, 4 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I can say for certain that the Reception section seems rather sparse. This section should include commentaries and consensuses on at least the game's three major components: the gameplay, the visuals, and the audio. Other aspects may have their own paragraphs as well if enough coverage is lent to them, such as voice-acting, writing, etc.. Here's some examples to study to get a good idea of what a substantial Reception section looks like: 1, 2, 3 Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 19:38, 9 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

The lede could be expanded, and should include more information from the article.
"Multi-player" section shouldn't be empty.
Reception section should be expended. Try going to metacritic to find more reviews. The Reception section should include what reviewers said about the game.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:43, 8 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]