Wikipedia:Peer review/Villa Park/archive1
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Currently a good article, it is requested that this be reviewed with WP:FAC in mind. Thanks. The Rambling Man 10:19, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
- As The Rambling Man has said this is part of the ongoing improvement of all Aston Villa articles by me and Woodym555. We aim to get this article up to WP:FA. Thanks Everlast1910 10:34, 28 September 2007 (UTC)
A couple of brief comments:
- How come Villa Park is a redirect to Villa Park, England? Either this article should be at Villa Park, or the disambiguation page should be.
- I agree, I don't know how to do it can someone sort it out for me :) Everlast1910 22:58, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
- Records section - the since 1947 presumably refers to post-Second World War seasons. Highest since 1947 makes it sound like 1947 had higher attendances. 1949 season and 1986 season are ambiguous, as the English football season spans two calendar years. Use 1948–49 season instead.
- Done fixed it to post war instead of the year.
- The first paragraph of the Future section is a little crystal-ballish, consisting of uncited speculation.
- Removed it, it was added just before while i wasn't on, i have reverted back to how it was.
Oldelpaso 19:26, 2 October 2007 (UTC) Everlast1910 22:58, 2 October 2007 (UTC)