Wikipedia:Peer review/Where's Lazlo?/archive1

Would like to get this rated. Given the limited context of the article, I doubt it would make GA (but you never know!), but I'd still like to improve this to a higher level. Any comments, suggestions, whatever. Thanks Yngvarr 12:09, 24 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]

  Done I've expanded the lead as best as I currently can.

  Done Added a few more links

  Done Added some screenshots

  • If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]

  Done Added a screenshot of the title card

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 14:39, 26 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]