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14:43:54, 30 April 2015 review of submission by Elemonier

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Elemonier (talk) 14:43, 30 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there,

I'm excited that my page was accepted and is officially a Wikipedia page. It is listed as a C-grade page. I checked what that means, but I would love some feedback on how to improve it.

Thank you in advance :)

Elemonier (talk) 14:43, 30 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Elemonier: The best thing you can do is add inline citations for everything in the article, and add anything else about Ellen Urbani's life that comes from reliable sources such as books and magazines. Wikipedia:Writing better articles can give you some ideas of how to improve prose, or you can have a look at a featured article such as Enid Blyton to get some inspiration of what is some of Wikipedia's best work. Please stick around and improve articles, we really do need more people helping out in the long term. We have many articles, including biographies of authors, that are sub-C class and could do with improvement. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 15:27, 30 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

17:39:25, 30 April 2015 review of draft by VTflatlander

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I am wondering how to add photographs to the page and how to format them wiithin the page. VTflatlander (talk) 17:39, 30 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@VTflatlander:Go to Commons:First steps and carefully step through the tutorial. When you get to "First steps/Uploading files", don't dive in too hastily. First follow the link on that page to learn about the different licensing options. Other useful advance reading includes Wikipedia:File names and Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Images, which will prepare you to answer important questions the upload wizard will ask you. If after that you have any questions or doubts, there is a dedicated help desk for image uploading.
Once you've uploaded an image, the picture tutorial can guide you through how to use it in an article. Worldbruce (talk) 01:03, 1 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

19:40:50, 30 April 2015 review of submission by SLBloom

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I want to confirm that I properly submitted the reworked links for the pupil list and the 2 new External Links. When I pasted them below the links did not accompany the copy/paste and I am thinking that same thing happened to the resubmission. What do I need to do to get these to you? I know that you would receive them if I forward an email to you that has the list/links. Is that a possibility?

This is not the place for you to post swathes of text for approval

Archiving the list of Robert Bloom's pupils is an important contribution to our culture; the list can be found only in this Wiki biography. (It is comparable to listing a composer's works with publisher.) The links give future researchers and writers the information needed to explore Bloom's legacy in depth. While some links are to a pupil's personal website, other links provide only a starting place for the researcher but are nonetheless valuable. Two doctoral dissertations have already been written on Robert Bloom's teaching legacy, earning the authors the degree of Doctor of Musical Arts.

John A. Abberger Stephen Adelstein Robert Atherholt Frank Avril Mark Baker Eugene Barnard David Barnett Susan Barrett John Bennett William Bennett III Peter Bergstrom Nancy Berliner Sara Lambert Bloom David M. Bourns Mark Brown Robert Carpenter Deborah Carter William Cobb Roger Cole Randall Cook Marilyn Coyne Sandra D'Amato Judith Dansker-DePaolo Stephen Davis Susan Dayton Edward Dolbashian William Douglas Susan Eischeid Marcia Ellis Thomas Fay Carl Fels David Flacks Mark Gainer G. Rodney Garside Elden Gatwood Catherine Gerardi Eileen Gibson Clelia Goldings Robert Goler Doris Goltzer Gay Greschel Arnold Gross Dennis Harper Earnest Harrison Jeffrey Harrison Peter Hedrick Susan Hicks Ruth Holtzman Delight Immonen Robert Ingliss Eugene Isabelle Marsha Jaeger Denise Kamradt Thomas Keahey Joyce Kelley Colleen Kennedy Michael Kenyon Richard Killmer Katie Koffel Fredrick Korman Ezra Kotzin Kim Kowalke Lisa Kozenko Glenn Laguna Barbara Landeen Phyllis Lanini Jerry Lazar Diane Lesser David Lichtenstein Marc Lifschey Michael Lipton Susan Logan Richard Lottridge Humbert Lucarelli William Lynch John Mahan Robert Martenson Paul McCandless Roger McDonald Tamar Melzer Shelly Mesirow Kurt Michaelis Patricia Morehead Ryohei Nakagawa Bruce Neuman Patricia Grignet Nott Stephen Parkany William Parrish Gerald Pav Peggy Pearson Ilona Pederson Vanessa Pentz-Adamo Janet Piez Oded (Udi) Pintus Carolyn Pollack Seth Powsner Ronald Quinn Andrea Ridilla Kay Roylance Bernard Rubenstein Carol Rupert Rogene Russell James Ryon Mark Salkind Lucinda Santiago Harry Sargous Gary Schultheis Margaret Schultz Earl Schuster Francine Schutzman Phyllis Secrist William Joseph Seidel Mina Seidman-Haas Rheta Naylor Smith Jennifer Sperry David Spitzer Robert Sprenkle Barbara Todd Sprenkle Patricia Stenberg Ray Still Daniel Stolper Caesar Storlazzi John Symer Bobby Taylor Stephen Taylor Robert Thompson Joel Timm Larry Timm William Ulrich, Jr Eugene Vance Alice VanLeuvan [Hekster] John Viton Allan Vogel Jerry Voorhees Susan Vought Louise Brown Waite David Weiss Tamar Beach Wells Abby Rosenberg Wells Elizabeth Wheeler JoAnn Baxter Wich Coco Widmar Paul Winter Paul Wolfe Doreen H. Wunsch Phillip Young Avinoam Yosselevitch Mary Beth Zimmerman


External links: 

Official website robertandsaralambertbloom.com

Discography on official website Obituary: February 16, 1994 New York Times Obituary: February 18, 1994 Philadelphia Inquirer Dissertation: The American School of Oboe Playing: Robert Bloom, John de Lancie, John Mack, and the Influence of Marcel Tabuteau by Galbraith, Amy M., D.M.A., WEST VIRGINIA UNIVERSITY, 2011, 101 pages; 3476409 

Dissertation:  The Legacy of Oboist and Master Teacher, Robert Bloom by Janna Leigh Ryon, D.M.A., UNIVERSITY OF MARYLAND, 2014

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SLBloom (talk) 19:40, 30 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@SLBloom: I've changed the format of the draft to what I believe you intended. You can edit it further if I've missed the mark. The draft will be reviewed in due course, but you should expect that further changes will be required to conform to Wikipedia policies and guidelines before the draft has any chance of approval. Worldbruce (talk) 01:58, 1 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

19:48:03, 30 April 2015 review of submission by Doylecf

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We would like to change the name of our page. How can we do that? We would like it to read "Lyles, Bissett, Carlisle, and Wolff (LBC&W)". We mixed up the order originally.

Thank you!

Doylecf (talk) 19:48, 30 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Doylecf (talk) 19:48, 30 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Doylecf:   Done. In the future, you can change a draft's title by moving the page. Just click on the "More" link at the top right of a draft. wia (talk) 19:59, 30 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Doylecf: The page title may not conform to Wikipedia policy and guidelines, so you may be changing it again sooner than you expected. Please review what the policy on article titles says about article title format. You may also find the Manual of Style's section on acronyms in page titles relevant. When you're sure of one that’s in line with these, Wikipedia:Moving a page will tell you all you ever wanted to know about how to change a title. Worldbruce (talk) 20:27, 30 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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