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February 21

13:56:34, 21 February 2015 review of submission by Bluerommel

• Bluerommel (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Gabriele Corno (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Good Morning. Thanks for the support. I seemed to have put many references. Where do you think are biggest gaps? Can you help me? BR

Bluerommel (talk) 13:56, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

Many of your references either do not support the statements that they follow, or do not verify that the individual has received significant coverage in independent reliable sources. So for example, the statement in your Draft that Corno became "a member of the National Academy of Engineering" of the University of California at Berkeley, is referenced by a "snipview" ... whatever that may be... that only seems to support the statement that Corno was an alumnus of Bocconi University. And "http://www.goodreads.com" and "http://www.lionsclubs.org/EN/index.php" and similar top level URLs with no further details are of no use as references to prove notability. Arthur goes shopping (talk) 13:17, 24 February 2015 (UTC)