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03:22:48, 20 May 2015 review of submission by Dhobson828

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Reshoring - bringing manufacturing back to the US is important to the US economy. It will help us rebuild the middle class, bring jobs back to the US and it is the right thing to do. I am looking for advise on how to fix my article. Here is the message I was sent: "Sources are needed to show that "Reshoring" is an established term, and not just a neologism. Also, there should by no external links in the body of the article."

Where would I find the sources you need? I added the external links to help establish was I was saying is true. Can you provide me advise on how to get this approved.

Thanks!!

Dhobson828 (talk) 03:22, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Dhobson828: I think we could accomodate a general article on reshoring (there is currently a small section in offshoring), so I am passing your submission - but it still needs a lot of work.
The easiest way is to type "reshoring" into Google and click on "News". That should give you plenty of sources - the first one I happened to find was this article in Forbes talking about the increase of reshoring in the US. However, a problem with your article is that it does not cover a worldwide view. Let's take the first sentence - "The act of bringing manufacturing back to America." Playing devil's advocate, I might claim that Uruguay, Chile and Venezuela are all "in America" (I know you mean the United States of America but not everyone will!) Meanwhile, here is a news piece in The Insurance Times reporting a company reshoring call centres back to the UK from abroad as a unique selling point. So there are plenty of other places where reshoring is happening, and they should also be included. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 10:09, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Ritchie333:Thanks so much for your assistance! You are correct, since I originally wrote this article we have been working with universities in Europe and their reshoring efforts. I will keep enhancing this article based on your feedback!

16:45:51, 20 May 2015 review of submission by Flower244

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I have submitted article to be reviewed and ghe reviewer who did it said someone with more expertise in the field should have a look at it. Should I place some post for this or not? Flower244 (talk) 16:45, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  Declined You also ignored a comment made by another reviewer. We make comments to help you. Please be helped. Fiddle Faddle 09:24, 21 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

22:47:42, 20 May 2015 review of submission by 116.111.202.228

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116.111.202.228 (talk) 22:47, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there - you haven't specified a draft or asked a question. Is there anything you need help with in regards to an article draft? ~SuperHamster Talk Contribs 23:21, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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