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September 17

02:50:55, 17 September 2016 review of draft by 2600:8803:7A00:19:305B:692B:6CCF:46DA

2600:8803:7A00:19:305B:692B:6CCF:46DA (talk · contribs)
- Draft:2017 in baseball (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

the all star game is being played in Miami

2600:8803:7A00:19:305B:692B:6CCF:46DA (talk) 02:50, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft isn't a complete sentence, and it isn't clear whether it is meant to be a draft article or a test edit. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:56, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

08:35:39, 17 September 2016 review of submission by Jampunk86

Jampunk86 (talk · contribs)
- No draft specified!

Jampunk86 08:35, 17 September 2016 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jampunk86 (talk • contribs)

Your submission is blank. Did you submit it for review by accident before entering anything? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:15, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

17:57:13, 17 September 2016 review of submission by DJViking

DJViking (talk · contribs)
- Draft:List of Games with OpenGL Support (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

This article submission was previously declined because lack of sources. For most of these games there is no offical source that outright say specific that it is developed with OpenGL support.

That does not mean it does not belong in the list. Games that is released on Linux are OpenGL. It is as simple as that.

Some of the games I have taken from another Wiki page that lists OpenGL programs: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_OpenGL_programs I cannot see that they EITHER has ANY source.

One source could be what engine is used. Game engine that are OpenGL are id Tech, CryEngine, Unreal Engine, Unity, Unigine Engine. Cannot the source be another Wiki page? I have found pages on Game engine mentioning both Linux and OpenGL.

Also: How did all the other lists manange to get submitted without sources. List of games for DirectX.

DJViking (talk) 17:57, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

See WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS. Also, Wikipedia cannot be used as a source. Robert McClenon (talk) 18:18, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

18:25:52, 17 September 2016 review of submission by Ekay514

Ekay514 (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Credico (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Ekay514 (talk) 18:25, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

My article has been rejected due to an acclaimed lack of notability, yet I believe a simple objective viewing of the given information would prove the contrary. Credico's size, 400 subcontractors in 19 countries, and controversy, 1000 opt-in class action, surpass that of the Cobra Group, a very similar direct marketing group which achieved approval. If I can any way express its notability in a greater way, please inform me, but in terms of notability, I firmly believe it is far from sufficient at this point.

There appears to be a typographical error in this comment. "I firmly believe it is far from sufficient at this point" would mean that the article is far from sufficient. If so, why did you resubmit it? Resubmitting a draft as is without waiting for comments can be seen as gaming the system, trying to find an easier reviewer. Also, read WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS. If you think that the other direct marketing group should not have an article, you are free to nominate it for deletion. Robert McClenon (talk) 18:52, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 20:28:26, 17 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Rroneice

Rroneice (talk · contribs)
- User:Rroneice/sandbox/Keith Clizark (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I am requesting help because I research other Wikipedia pages of artists that worked on some of the same projects this artist worked on. His name is listed as part of the album, but his name is not highlighted in blue. The last time the page was rejected was because of sources and many of the sources were direct links to other Wikipedia pages. I am going to paste a copy of the submission along with references to get help on.

No need to put whole submissions here. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:50, 18 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Keith Clizark (born Keith Clark) is a music producer, engineer, composer, song writer, and programmer from the United States. His works consists of West Coast Hip Hop. He has produced, co-produced, wrote, composed, and engineered for artists such as, Snoop Dogg, Tha Eastsidaz, and B-Legit among others. At the age of four Clizark relocated with his mother, Shirley Clark, from Greenville, Mississippi to Long Beach, California. Keith gained an interest in music after hearing Parliament Funkadelic’s “Flashlight” played at his Aunt Barbara's family gathering. A few years later Hip Hop was born. Keith used Hip Hop as the catalyst to creatively express himself musically. The name “Clizark” was coined from his love of Mozart. Clizark began his career in the early 1980’s as a Disc Jockey with the group Beat Control. At age 17 Clizark and his Beat Control Crew began working for Rory Koffman at the first most popular Hip Hop radio station located in Los Angeles, 1580 KDAY. From 1986-1989 Clizark attended Long Beach City College majoring in Music Theory/Business. In 1991 Clizark landed his first major label placement with Capitol Records for "You Ain't All That" by group 3-D which reached Billboard’s Top Ten Dance Spot. In 1996 Clizark produced The Dove Shack’s “Summertime in the LBC” (Remix). In 1998 Clizark was a writer and Producer on Snoop Dogg’s The Game is to Be Sold, Not to be Told. In 1999 Clizark produced and engineered on B-Legit’s Hempin’ Ain’t Easy Album. Also in 1999 Clizark produced on TRU’s Da Crime Family Album. He produced on the 1999 Thicker Than Water (Soundtrack). In 2000 Clizark produced on The Eastsidaz (Album) “Tha G in Deee”. Clizark produced “Go Away” featuring Kokane on Snoop Dogg’s Tha Last Meal (2000) which debuted on the US Billboard 200. In 2001 Clizark produced “Now Is the Time” on the Tha Eastsidaz Duces ‘n Trays: The Old Fashioned Way and What’s the Worst That Could Happen? [Original Soundtrack]. Also in 2001 Clizark was a music programmer on The Brothers [2001] Original Soundtrack. In 2002 Clizark produced on Snoop Dogg’s Paid tha Cost to Be Da Bo$$ which debuted at number 12 on the US Billboard 200, becoming certified platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA). In 2011 Clizark created the “Platinum Essentials” for Big Fish Audio. From 2010-Current Clizark has produced music and directed music videos for various artists.

Produced, Composed, Engineered, and Wrote Songs (Highlights)

3-D “You Ain’t All That” (1991) Composer-Label: Capitol Records-DPRO-79831 Snoop Dogg - "C You when I Get There" feat. Mystical,C- Murder, Silk The Shocker and Master P (1998) Writer-Producer-Label: No Limit-Priority B-Legit - "The Game Be Cold" feat. Snoop Dogg (1999) Engineer, Producer-Label: Koch Records, Sic Wid It Records B-Legit - "Where the Gangstas At" feat. Kurupt, Mack 10 (1999) Engineer, Producer-Label: Koch Records, Sic Wid It Records Snoop Dogg - "Go Away" (2000) Producer-Label: No Limit Records-Doggystyle The Eastsidaz - "The G in D" feat. Snoop Dogg (2000) Producer-Label: Dogghouse-TVT The Eastsidaz - "Now's the Time" Feat. Kocane (2001) Producer-Label: Doggystyle-TVT Snoop Dogg - "Suited and Booted" (2002) Writer, Producer-Label: Doggystyle- Priority-Capitol Snoop Dogg- "Fu@! what They Say" (2001) Instrumentation, Producer-Label: Priority

Filmography (Highlights)

Thicker Than Water (1999)-[Soundtrack] (Producer) Label: Hoo-Bangin’ Priority The Brothers (2001)-[Original Soundtrack] (Programming) Label: Warner What’s the Worst That Could Happen (2001) [Original Soundtrack] (Instrumentation, Producer) Label: Priority

Project Highlights

 1991 You Ain’t All That (Radio Mix) 3D-Producer, Composer  1991 You Ain’t All That (Original Mix) 3D-Producer, Composer  1991 You Ain’t All That (Radio Mix with Rap) 3D-Producer, Composer  1991 You Ain’t All That (Original Mix with Rap) 3D-Producer, Composer  1991 You Ain’t All That (Club Mix) 3D-Producer, Composer  1991 You Ain’t All That (Instrumental) 3D-Producer, Composer  1996 Summer Time in The LBC (Remix) The Dove Shack-Producer  1998 Da Game is to Be Sold, not to Be Told-Snoop Dogg-Writer, Producer  1999 Hempin’ Ain’t Easy-B Legit-Engineer, Producer  1999 Thick Than Water [Soundtrack] Producer  2000 Tha Eastsidaz (Album) Tha Eastsidaz-Producer  2000 The Last Meal-Snoop Dogg-Producer  2001 Duces ‘N Trayz: The Old Fashioned Way-Tha Eastsidaz-Producer  2001 The Brothers [Original Soundtrack] Programming  2001 What’s The Worst That Could Happen? [Original Soundtrack] Instrumentation, Producer  2002 Paid Da Cost to Be Da Bo$$-Snoop Dogg-Producer  2011 Preserved-Young Bleed-Composer, Mixer, Producer

References

Categories: Living People/ American Record Producer

Rroneice (talk) 20:28, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

None of your references are in the form of footnotes. Do not use Wikipedia as a reference; use it as a link or a See Also. See WP:Markup on how to mark up sections and improve the formatting of your draft. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:51, 18 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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