Wikipedia:WikiProject Aviation/Peer review/FedEx Express

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Major changes have been made to this article since it was rated as a Start Class. Spikydan1 (talk) 20:00, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Born2flie

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This peer review evaluated this version of the article.

Peer review (see here for criteria)
  1. Prose
    a. well written: b. comprehensive: c. factually accurate: d. summary style:
    • lead section paragraphs are small, consider combining (WP:LEAD)
    • wording of largest airline fleet and tonnage in lead section is difficult
    • shifts between verb tenses throughout article
    • single line, single sentence paragraphs throughout article
    • punctuation problems
  2. References
    a. use of inline citations: b. reliable sources: c. No original research:
  3. Style
    a. lead section: b. appropriate structure: c. conforms to WP:MOS:
    • left aligned images separate subheading from text (MOS:IMAGES)
    • formatting of citations not according to MOS, use {{cite}} template, include title and url and accessed date.
  4. Controversy
    a. neutral point of view: b. stable, with no edit wars:
  5. Graphics
    a. quality: b. image licenses:
    • FedExFeeder image is poor quality and slightly blurry. It is a low resolution image, so the thumb doesn't hide the problems.
  6. Quality:
    Article classification:
    C-Class. Still needs some work, but hopefully, this will give a better idea than just the B-Class checklist. --Born2flie (talk) 22:21, 30 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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