Wikipedia:WikiProject Cities/Featured article drive/Phoenix/Project FA Phoenix

This page is a compiled list of suggestions for improvement for the city of Phoenix, Arizona, which is within the scope of the WikiProject Cities Featured article drive. A listing of those who suggested the provision is also listed. Once something has been completed, replace the cross mark with a tick mark.

Important Links

Article page - Talk page - Task force page

Goals

As Derived from To-Do List on Talk Page:

Organize the Geography Section (User:Derek.cashman^talk)

 Not done The geography section is somewhat unclear and muddled. The article should be reorganized, and information about mountains and cities should be added to increase comprehensibility.

References (User:Derek.cashman^talk)

The reason why most of the articles in the scope of the FAC drive is because they are lacking adequate references. Using {{Cite web}}, all references should quote hard facts. over-referencing is better than inadequate referencing.

Where to Look:

•  Not done History section: Could use many more inline citations.

•  Not done Economy section: No inline citations whatsoever.

•  Not done Culture section: No inline citations whatsoever.

•  Not done Sports section: No inline citations in either the text or the table.

•  Not done Parks and recreation section: No inline citations at all.

•  Not done Media section: First two paragraphs uncited.

•  Not done Government section: Lead paragraphs for section uncited.

•  Not done Education section: All listed schools should be cited.

•  Not done Major Streets subsection: Completely uncited.

•  Not done Freeways subsection: Completely uncited.