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Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Completed Articles Archive/December 2006

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  • One last change is replacing "EP" and "LP" with more familiar terms. While most people know the difference, the media is much more important than it's length. --Sigma 7 18:36, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • I checked over this article - given it's a major change, it still needs another pair of eyes. The most major change involved the intro that was cloning too much info from 1080p but had red links. --Sigma 7 21:39, 6 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I checked; does not appear to have copyedit problems Hmains 20:52, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
No copyedit problems, but the style is a bit repetitive. --Sigma 7 23:04, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sorry, Rintrah--I re-edited this one after you did, I think. It could probably use one more set of eyes before we call it "final". Also note: My style guide didn't have any guidance on Islamic proper names, so I checked related articles and it appears that the "al-" in this name (and similar names) is not capitalized, except at the beginning of sentences. If anyone else knows differently, please edit accordingly. Thanks! Galena11 23:30, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Hmains did a copyedit after this posted (thanks, Hmains!), so I think we're ok on this one.Galena11 17:06, 21 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
That's ok. I was so confused, I didn't know what I was doing. The article needed a reorganisation, which I was too lazy to do. Rintrah 09:00, 22 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
looks ok Hmains 21:10, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
made some minor changes--done now! Galena11 21:50, 21 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I do not see any copyedit problems. Hmains 20:58, 17 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Proofread complete! Galena11 03:48, 22 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I made a few quick changes and reworks to one section. Call it done? - skrshawk ( Talk | Contribs ) 21:08, 26 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Works for me! Galena11 22:32, 26 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Done! Gzkn 05:22, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Done! Gzkn 05:37, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Done! This was a real easy one ;) Gzkn 08:35, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Done! Gzkn 12:59, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Done! Gzkn 13:26, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Done! Could use expansion with those familiar with psychology. I bet it could be quite an interesting article... Gzkn 02:44, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The article is nicely ce'd, but it's a wreck - I'll fix it over the next few days, but then - since I'm not a great writer - you all will have to ce it all over again :-) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:01, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I completely rewrote this article, since it was basically a stub with almost no accurate content. My prose stinks, so a new CE would be great. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 06:36, 2 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • It is redundant, and I changed it when I did my proofread. The proof is complete, but for some reason (I think having to do with the images in the article), all of the "edit" links that should be on the Level 2 header lines are down at the bottom and obscure the text. Does anyone more experienced than me know how to change it? And can you move this to the "done" section if you do manage to fix it? Galena11 04:00, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Gzkn 05:15, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Gzkn 05:48, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Blitz (wrestler): A hilarious chemical byproduct of a testosterone accident — and I thought Element Girl was funny!
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