Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Yugoslav torpedo boat T1
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Article promoted by Ian Rose (talk) via MilHistBot (talk) 05:06, 13 May 2015 (UTC) « Return to A-Class review list
- Nominator(s): Peacemaker67 (crack... thump)
Yugoslav torpedo boat T1 (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)
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The first in what will hopefully be a series of A-Class nominations of smaller vessels of the Royal Yugoslav Navy. Saw service with five navies, and was part of the escort that was unable to protect the Austro-Hungarian dreadnought SMS Szent István from Italian MAS boats in 1918. Expanded significantly in last few months, and recently successfully nominated for GA. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 07:17, 29 April 2015 (UTC)
Support on prose per standard disclaimer. These are my edits. - Dank (push to talk) 03:54, 30 April 2015 (UTC)
SupportComments: looks pretty good to me. Just a few minor comments from me: AustralianRupert (talk) 23:11, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
- check the English variation, I see some British (e.g. "harbour") and some US (e.g. "defense")
- "fitout" or "fit-out"?
- the first sentence of the Interwar period section seems a bit long and might be smoother if it were split somehow.
- are there any details about what the ship was used for during the Interwar period?
- in the References, London is probably overlinked
- the licencing of the image used appears correct to me (no action required)
- All done. Added a bit about the interwar period, but she was a small ship and they didn't have much money. Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 06:34, 3 May 2015 (UTC)
- No worries, thanks, I've added my support now. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 12:41, 3 May 2015 (UTC)
Support Comments
- The interwar para says that T 76 and three other 250t boats were given to Yugoslavia, but then six 250t boats participated in the Mediterranean cruise in 1929 - I assume you meant that there were three other T-group 250t boats, since that's the breakdown given in the class article.
- Is Hvar worth a red link?
- "She continued in Yugoslav service under that name..." - I assume that refers back to Golešnica?
- There are a couple of duplicate links in the interwar section. Parsecboy (talk) 17:58, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
- All done. There were four F-group boats transferred to the Yugoslavs as well, so the six were six of the eight, so I've clarified. Also clarified the final name. These are my edits. Thanks for the review! Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 23:51, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
- Looks good to me, great work on this little tin can ;) Parsecboy (talk) 19:27, 12 May 2015 (UTC)
- All done. There were four F-group boats transferred to the Yugoslavs as well, so the six were six of the eight, so I've clarified. Also clarified the final name. These are my edits. Thanks for the review! Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 23:51, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
Support
- Great job, I only have one comment. The name Golešnica, is it derived from Golešnica? If yes, I think it would be good to mention it. MisterBee1966 (talk) 13:44, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
- Given it was initially given to her by the Croats, I doubt it. I haven't found any RS for the basis of the name. Thanks for the review, MB! Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 07:02, 12 May 2015 (UTC)
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