Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Midshipman/Archive 2

Midshipman

(2008 review here here, not particularly relevant.)

I'm submitting this article for Peer review prior to resubmitting it as a FA candidate. I've made quite a few changes since the first FAC review in June, and it was copy edited last week, which was the main complaint in the FAC comments. Thanks for your assistance!

Kirk (talk) 20:04, 14 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed the dashes for you. YellowMonkey (bananabucket) 05:10, 17 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin

This looks excellent, overall. A few minor suggestions:

The various navigation templates should use standard military history styling (e.g. {{military navigation}}) where possible; if that's not feasible, then manually changing the color scheme to match would be a good idea.
The "Other Commonwealth nations" section has some image alignment problems at large resolutions, since the sections are so small. One easy way to fix this would be to stagger the images there to the left and right margins.
I'd try to eliminate the "See also" section before going to FAC; it shouldn't be difficult to work the links into the article text somewhere, and doing so will make the article look more "finished".

Keep up the great work! Kirill ^[talk] [pf] 04:27, 5 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]