Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/United States Air Force

This article has not (ever?) been peer reviewed or rated. It is an important major article. Bburton 21:55, 2 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Not bad, but it still requires major work:

Citations should be liberally inserted into the text. As it stands, the article is very underreferenced; it should be possible to find quite reputable sources—particularly print works—for much of the material.
Lots of choppy prose, one-sentence paragraphs, one-paragraph sections, and so forth, particularly after the "History" section.
The "Air Force Core Values" section really isn't one. If these are to be included, they would be better off in a floating box.
The "Aircraft" section is basically a giant list. This should be turned into (descriptive) prose, possibly discussing types of aircraft.
The gallery of aircraft pictures should be spread out. Not all of them need to be in this particular article, for that matter.
The "Common badges" section is another list.
The "Rank Structure" table needs to have some labels added; there's no way to tell what some of the fields mean at the moment.
The "Trivia" section should be removed with extreme prejudice. If it can't be worked into the text, it's not worth mentioning (except, perhaps, in a footnote).
The "See also" should be trimmed of anything linked in the article (which should, ideally, be everything).
The external links should be limited to those which provide substantial resources beyond what's available on Wikipedia.

Overall, lots of things to be improved on. Kirill Lokshin 03:06, 3 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]