Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/SMS Preussen (1903)/archive1

TFA blurb review

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Any thoughts or edits? (I'm posting this one early because I'll be tied up with another project for almost a month starting on the 13th. I don't know when this will be promoted at FAC.) - Dank (push to talk) 23:50, 6 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

SMS Preussen (Prussia) was the fourth of five pre-dreadnought battleships of the Braunschweig class, built for the German Imperial Navy. Launched in October 1903 and commissioned in July 1905, the ship was armed with a battery of four 28 cm (11 in) guns and had a top speed of 18 knots (33 km/h; 21 mph). Preussen served as the flagship of II Battle Squadron of the High Seas Fleet for the majority of her career. She was a guard ship for much of World War I, first in the German Bight and then in the Danish straits and the Baltic. She participated in a fleet sortie in December 1914 in support of the Raid on Scarborough, Hartlepool and Whitby, during which the German fleet briefly clashed with a detachment of the British Grand Fleet. In 1917 she became a tender for U-boats based in Wilhelmshaven. After the war, Preussen was retained by the re-formed navy and converted into a depot ship for minesweepers. (This article is part of a featured topic: Battleships of Germany.)

The only thing I might change is dropping the "F-type" bit - we don't have a link for that, and it doesn't provide any useful information in a main page blurb. Parsecboy (talk) 12:31, 8 March 2019 (UTC)Reply
Thanks Nate, done. - Dank (push to talk) 13:39, 8 March 2019 (UTC)Reply