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Reviews for Article Talk: Green building certification systems

in a whole content, it is a clear definition of the certification systems take place in different countries. as critics, to mention carbon mono-oxide [emissions] are good but there is no mention of VOC [volatile organic compounds] which are a highly more critical issue in correspondence with CO2 emissions, being more hazardous to green air. moreover, probably it could be better to mention a certified building for each case between Sweden to the United States and to make an evaluation for each different certification system standard. In a whole concept, good job, I appreciated, thank you.

--Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 13:58, 17 July 2020 (UTC)

--Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 14:16, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur

Reviewed Article Casa del Fascio_by Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur as a part of Wikipedia:GLAM/PoliMi/2020-b[edit source]

Reviewed Article Casa del Fascio_by Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur as a part of Wikipedia:GLAM/PoliMi/2020-b[edit source]

Casa Del Fascio, a so well-qualified and well-designed building, and also it is a pleasure to write critics on this building, just a whole appreciation. The interior views are also so excellent with the idea of open space and frame - work studies continue also in the outer space of the building, just a whole concept, perfectly designed, thank you.

--Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 15:20, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 14:36, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk • contribs)

--Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 15:20, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur

Article Reviewed by --Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 14:57, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur_ for Editing Talk:Technology entrepreneurship (new section)as a part of Wikipedia:GLAM/PoliMi/2020-b[edit source]

Article Reviewed by --Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 14:57, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur_ for Editing Talk: Technology entrepreneurship (new section)as a part of Wikipedia:GLAM/PoliMi/2020-b

Related to the article Editing Talk: Technology entrepreneurship, the 2 parts "resource assembly" and "growth and liquidity" needs further information, and also further readings to consider on and give references. In any way, it is good to see an article in connection with technology and entrepreneurship, so useful to make technology correlate with the business world. Finally, the 3 methods that have been given in the conclusion part of the article need definitions of their concepts, now they have remained just as topics, so it could be better to get the contexts, just a clear and short description is possible, thank you.

--Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 15:20, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 14:57, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur_

Article Reviewed by --Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 14:57, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur_ for Editing Talk: Technology entrepreneurship (new section)as a part of Wikipedia:GLAM/PoliMi/2020-b — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk • contribs)

--Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur (talk) 15:20, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Dott Eng Arch SelaleSungur