Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/February 7, 2022

Comments to copy-edit

Thank you, and agree with most changes. Not yet happy with a few things:

• We lost that the hymn (first person, emotional) and the scripture (doctrinal) contrast, and complement each other. I trust that you can say that better than I could.
• The "It" in the last sentence is ambiguous, having spoken about a theory and a funeral which also could be "it" ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:36, 31 January 2022 (UTC)

dying, there was also a later version on my talk, perhaps consult that also. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:20, 31 January 2022 (UTC)

wish now that it's protected

• The article was changed to a more precise link, and it would be nice if the blurb would follow: "in five different chorale settings" instead of "in five different chorale settings". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:44, 6 February 2022 (UTC)