Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/July 18, 2022
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Jimfbleak in topic Revision of blurb
Revision of blurb
edit@Jimfbleak: I revised the blurb, there were some redundancies and inaccuracies, but I also removed bits that were not important enough, imo, for the Main Page blurb and introduced other bits, like the desert march and Yarmouk, which were two of the most important events of his life/legacy. Let me know your thoughts, and if further revisions should be made. Al Ameer (talk) 22:17, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
- Al Ameer, fine with me, it's your area of expertise and it's still within the character limit Jimfbleak - talk to me? 08:46, 7 July 2022 (UTC)