Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/July 22, 2016

it was released in Japan, the United States, the United Kingdom and Australia

Not sure this needs to be specified—this just means that it was released worldwide, eventually. Those countries represent the different major markets. Alternatively it could be "first released in Japan and later worldwide" or just "eventually released worldwide". czar 17:36, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

Great, thanks. - Dank (push to talk) 18:06, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

The game is presented in 2½D, with pre-rendered 3D backgrounds behind 2D gameplay

The most common term is 2.5D, not with ½. I would change "with pre-rendered 3D backgrounds behind 2D gameplay", as the gameplay is more important. My suggestion: "The game is presented in 2.5D, with 2D gameplay featuring pre-rendered 3D backgrounds". soetermans. ^{↑↑↓↓←→←→ B A TALK} 07:46, 12 July 2016 (UTC)

Another option is "2D gameplay atop pre-rendered 3D backgrounds". The ½ was to make 2.5D less jargony (½ being the way it's pronounced). @Dank, thoughts? czar 08:19, 12 July 2016 (UTC)

Sounds good. Thanks for dropping by, Soetermans. - Dank (push to talk) 11:09, 12 July 2016 (UTC)

• @Dank, "as she journeys" → "in her journey"? Eh? czar 23:40, 21 July 2016 (UTC)