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| Submission declined on 22 July 2024 by CFA (talk). This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies. Declined by CFA 4 months ago. | |
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| Submission declined on 21 June 2024 by DoubleGrazing (talk). This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are: Declined by DoubleGrazing 5 months ago.
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Comment: Two of your references cannot be found. The remainder appear to be churnalism.Time to find decent references that actually show that it passes WP:NCORP or to give this quest up.This is a prime example of WP:CITEKILL. Instead we need one excellent reference per fact asserted. If you are sure it is beneficial, two, and at an absolute maximum, three. Three is not a target, it's a limit. Aim for one. A fact you assert, once verified in a reliable source, is verified. More is gilding the lily. Please choose the very best in each case of multiple referencing for a single point and either drop or repurpose the remainder.This hinders any review. I looked at them all. Who else will? 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 06:31, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Does the second, single-sentence paragraph (which essentially says nothing) really need 11 citations to support it?Please get rid of the WP:REFBOMBING, leave just the 3-5 sources that actually establish notability per WP:GNG. DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:18, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
Green Hills Farms, Inc. is an independent, family-owned grocery store in Syracuse, New York, that was established in 1977.[1] In 2001, Inc. (magazine) named Green Hills the "Best Little Grocery Store in America". [2][3]
Green Hills has remained competitive as a small grocery store through a marketing strategy that focuses on strengthening customer relationships with loyalty and rewards programs.[4][5][6][7][8][9][10][11][12][13][14]
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edit- ^ Clark, Ken (December 2005). "Pointing to loyalty: Green Hills' latest strategy brings kiosks and biometrics to the forefront". Chain Store Age. 81 (12): 136. Retrieved 2024-06-21.
- ^ Greco, Susan (June 2001). "Inc. case study". Inc. Vol. 23, no. 8. p. 54. Retrieved 2024-06-21.
- ^ "The CEO". Inc. 23 (8): 54. June 2001. Retrieved 28 June 2024 – via Gale Academic OneFile.
- ^ "NEW WORLD OF INDEPENDENTS". Supermarket News. May 4, 1998.
- ^ "Grocer Adds a Personal Touch to Loyalty". 16 November 2005.
- ^ Rosen, Darryl (November 2007). Surviving the Middle Miles: 26.2 Ways to Cross the Finish Line with Your Customers. AuthorHouse. ISBN 978-1-4343-4927-9.
- ^ Patler, Louis (September 2004). TrendSmart: The 21 Trends That Will Change the Way You do Business. Sourcebooks. ISBN 978-1-4022-1493-6.
- ^ "TAKE ACTION Lessons From A Grocer". Investor's Business Daily: A04. 3 April 2002. Retrieved 28 June 2024 – via Gale OneFile: News.
- ^ Robbins Gentry, Connie. “Fingerprinting the Future.” Chain Store Age, 1 July 2007, https://chainstoreage.com/news/fingerprinting-future. Accessed 30 June 2024.
- ^ Jensen, Meredith, and James Lattin. “Green Hills Market Loyalty Program.” Stanford Graduate School of Business, www.gsb.stanford.edu/faculty-research/case-studies/green-hills-market-loyalty-program. Accessed 30 June 2024.
- ^ Lewis, Len (July 1997). "Pushing the envelope: Green Hills Farms, a one-store wonder, is surpassing the chains in customer-specific marketing". Progressive Grocer. 76 (7): 91+. Retrieved 2024-06-21.
- ^ "Payments Industry Gives Retailers the Loyal Treatment". July 2007.
- ^ http://publications.dyson.cornell.edu/outreach/extensionpdf/2003/Cornell_AEM_eb0302-72.pdf
- ^ “Discounts Can Be Good for Business.” Financial Times, 31 May 2009, https://www.ft.com/content/2c42b896-4c57-11de-a6c5-00144feabdc0.
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