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| Submission declined on 11 July 2013 by MatthewVanitas (talk). This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject. Declined by MatthewVanitas 11 years ago. | |
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| Submission declined on 26 March 2013 by FoCuSandLeArN (talk). This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources. Declined by FoCuSandLeArN 11 years ago. | |
Comment: I have cleaned up some of the tone from the first half of the article for you; do not restore flattery/praise, formal religious honorifics, etc. Those are perfectly fine to use in the religious setting of your choice, but Wikipedia is for readers of all backgrounds and so does not follow any particular community's formalities. MatthewVanitas (talk) 04:22, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Comment: This is an encyclopedia, we do not permit phrases like The Holy Saint, as we shall refer to him hereafter as a mark of deep reverence. Please not we have hundreds of articles about extremely important and widely-recognised prophets and clergy, and yet we manage to describe them in a neutral, factual tone without praise or opinion.If you are not able to write this article without extensive flattery, honorific titles ("Hazrat"), etc, then you will not be able to write an article on Wikipedia. Please think of a few of the most famous Islamic scholars you know, take a look at the Wikipedia pages for them, and recognise how those articles are written in a neutral and factual style. If you can emulate that, and if you can find proper WP:Sourcing for this article from news or journalism (in any language), which does note include websites or articles by his followers, only then can we proceed. MatthewVanitas (talk) 04:11, 11 July 2013 (UTC) MatthewVanitas (talk) 04:11, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- Comment: Still lacking in independent third-party references. Actual notability seems questionable as I can find little about him (although normal for a person in a non-english speaking country). LionMans Account (talk) 16:03, 20 April 2013 (UTC)
- Comment: notable? FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 13:04, 26 March 2013 (UTC)
Syed Muhammad Ishtiyaque Alam Shahbazi | |
|---|---|
| Title | Sufi Scholar |
| Personal | |
| Born | Aman babu 21 January 1952 |
| Religion | Islam |
| School | Sunni (Sufi) |
| Education | Jamia Shahbazia |
| Profession | Sufi Scholar |
| Military service | |
| Rank | Allama/Mussannif |
| Muslim leader | |
| Period in office | 1952 to 2011 |
| Successor | Maulana Syed Intekhab Alam Shahbazi |
| Profession | Sufi Scholar |
| Previous post | Sufi Scholar of India and Pakistan |
Ishtiyaque Alam Shahbazi was a Sufi scholar, theologian, orator, and Urdu poet and writer (musannif). He wrote many books on Sufism topics, which have been published during the last thirty years.[citation needed] He was author of many books based on Sufism, Hajj, and Mehboob-e-Subhani.[clarification needed] He traveled around the world to attend many large mehfils. He is claimed to be the 46th descendant of the Islamic prophet Muhammad.
Shahbazi was 15th chief caretaker (sajjada nasheen) of Khanquah-e-Shahbazia, Bhagalpur, one of Bihar's most prominent khanqah.[1] A compilation of his poetry was made and published in the sub-continent entitled Sabz huroof ke shajar and Barg-e-sana harf harf.[2]. He was a founder of Maulana Wali ul Alam Academy under which many of the Islamic books has been published. His pen name, which he used for poetry, was Ziya.
Childhood
editShahbazi was born on 21st January 1952 on Thursday at Mulla Chak, Bhgalpur. He was the son of Syed Shah Safi ul Alam Shahbazi, and he shared his father's avocation for Islamic study even from a young age. His paternal grandfather was Sayyad Shah Wali ul Alam Shahbazi who was also a Sufi scholar. He[who?] was also known for his debating skills and poetry.
Shahbazi's elder son Syed Shah Intekhab alam Shahbazi is the current 16th chief caretaker (sajjada nasheen) of Khanquah-e-Shahbazia.[3][4]
Title
editShahbazi was first addressed as Shahbaz-e-Khitabat and Shahanshah-e-Fun by Arshad ul Quadri.
Biography
editIntekhab Alam Shahbazi produced a biography of Ishtiyaque Alam entitled Shahbaz-e-Khitabat.[5]
Death
editIshtiyaque Alam Shahbazi died on 4th May 2011 at the Ram Manohar Lohia Hospital, New Delhi, at age 59. On 6th May 2011, his body was buried in the courtyard of Khanquah-e-Shahbazia, Bhagalpur.[6]
Literary works
edit- Sultan-ul-aarefeen
- Aayat-e-Ilahi ke nigehbaan
- Ishtiyaqu-e-Durood
- Aadab-e-ziyarat
- Kayanat-e-tasawwuf
- Minahij-e-Ashraf
- Muhi uddin Ismi
- Sabz Huroof Ke Shajar[7]
- Barg-e-sana haraf haraf
- Nazr o Niyaaz
External links
editReferences
edit- ^ Md Muzaffar Imam (1987). Role of Muslims in the national movement, 1912-1930: a study of Bihar. Mittal Publications. p. 26. ISBN 978-81-7099-033-8. Retrieved 11 July 2013. - life of the Muslims of Bihar some of the old and religious institutions, Khanqahs, and shrines had also played significant role. ... of Phulwarisharif, Khanquah Kabiria of Sasaram, Khanquah Rahmania of Monghyr and Khanquah Shahbazia of ..
- ^ http://www.khanqahshahbazia.com/
- ^ http://www.radianceweekly.com/333/9660/istanbul-no-show-trial-for-israel/2012-11-18/inside-india/story-detail/576-year-old-manuscript-of-bukhari-sharif-found-in-bhagalpur.html
- ^ http://khanquahcouncil.blogspot.in/2012/12/list-of-khanquah-in-india.html
- ^ "Shahbaz e Khitabat" BioGraphy of Allama Syed Shah Ishtiyaque alam ziya Shahbazi
- ^ http://www.bhagalpurcity.com/news/death-of-sajjadanasheen-syed-shah-ishteyaq-alam-min-sahab.html
- ^ http://www.sufiajmer.net/library3.html