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Ofir Korsia | |
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 Miss Universe Israel 2024, Ofir Korsia | |
| Born | December 3, 2000 Rishon Letzion, Israel |
| Beauty pageant titleholder | |
| Title | Miss Universe Israel 2024 |
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Ofir Nathalie Korsia (Hebrew: אופיר קורסיה);[1] was crowned Miss Universe Israel 2024 on September 29 at the Hilton Aventura Miami, Florida. The 23-year-old actress, dancer, and model from Rishon LeZion will represent Israel at the Miss Universe pageant in Mexico this November. Organized by Edgar Saakyan of Edgar Entertainment (USA), this year’s event brought Israel back to the Miss Universe stage after a two-year break, with eight contestants competing for the title.
Miss Israel
editOn November 16, 2024, she will represent Israel at Miss Universe 2024 at the Arena CDMX in Mexico City, Mexico.[2]
References
edit- ^ "Miss Universe Israel 2024 is Ofir Natalie Korsia". Pageant Cirgle. Retrieved 2 October 2024.
- ^ "Ofir Natalie Korsia, representante de Israel en Miss Universo 2024". NBC. Retrieved 28 October 2024.