Draft talk:QC Terme

Autumn 2024 Educational Project Page

This page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: [1]https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(October_-_December,_2024) . The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform, have completed mandatory Training for Students, and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student Usernames are:

• LIUCGaia03
• LiucMichela3
• LIUCstefano03
• LIUCSouad03
• LIUCLorenzo10
• LIUCFederico3
• DataExplorer4

Issues or questions can be referred direct to the users or to their tutor @Limelightangel

Limelightangel Limelightangel (talk) 14:06, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

Feedback on draft 1/11/24

@LIUCGaia03, LiucMichela3, LIUCstefano03, LIUCSouad03, LIUCLorenzo10, LIUCFederico3, and DataExplorer4:

• note and use the guidelines and good practice on lead sections and look at good practice on other pages. See: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. See also Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Lead_section.
• note the guidelines on style. Statements using words like 'leading', 'success of' and 'fascinating' are inappropriate, subjective, biased and unsourced. See: Wikipedia:Manual of Style
• referencing: the reference for Maddalena, Roberta (2022-11-15) has been inserted incorrectly in the wrong place. It needs moving/creating where you wish the reference number to appear in the article, not below the References footer. See: Wikipedia:referencing for beginners
• grammar error in first sentence of History
• style: avoid unnecessary words like: 'In fact' (it should all be facts); 'draws inspiration'; 'crucial role'; etc. See Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style#Vocabulary
• Needs an Infobox: find a relevant Infobox template from Wikipedia:List of infoboxes and , and use this templare correctly, or find a similar page with a relevant Infobox, and use this. Note that these are templates with rules on how they are used and for acceptable field content/format
• missing sources: paragraphs 2 and 3 in History
• Note the guidance on this type of topic at: Wikipedia:Why can't I advertise my company or product on Wikipedia?
• ref. 2 (the company website) is not normally an acceptable source but relevant as an External link. See: Wikipedia:External links
• note the addition of ref. 1, which has been reused using the 'named reference' tool in the toolcar to create a refname tag to permit reuse of the same source with only 1 final reference for it. See: Help:Referencing_for_beginners

Limelightangel (talk) 13:44, 1 November 2024 (UTC)

I've tried to correct my errors. Now I think that the reference for Maddalena, Roberta... is placed in the right section. In addition I've corrected the grammar error in the first line of history paragraph and I've added the source of the other 2 paragraphs of history. LIUCSouad03 (talk) 17:29, 5 November 2024 (UTC)