Talk:1962 FA Charity Shield/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:27, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Shall be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 08:27, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• The title of the article should be included at the top of the infobox

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• "and played between" - and was played

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

• "and late goals from John White and Terry Medwin sandwiched a Roy Stephenson consolation goal for Ipswich." - try not to use the word "sandwiched"

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

Pre-match

• Add a wikilink to the Second Division to the relevant article

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

• "Ipswich were managed by former Tottenham played" - player

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

• "and had beaten the London club" - how about defeated for variety?

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

• "Tottenham Hotspur had beaten Burnley 3–1 at Wembley" - {{xt|[[Wembley Stadium (1923)|Wembley Stadium}}

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

• "where they defeated a Football Association representative XI 3–2." - think you want to clarify that the XI was a team for the uninformed

  Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

Summary

• "and Smith struck to double Tottenham's lead," - struck the ball

  Done. Not as suggested, but tightened. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

• What was Carberry's injury?

  It was apparently an ankle injury but I have no contemporaneous sources for that. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

References

• Reference 3 is dead and will need to be archived

  IABot smashed it. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 09:54, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

MWright96 addressed your concerns I hope. Responses all inline above. Thanks for the great review. Let me know if there's anything else I can do. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

• @The Rambling Man: I have nothing more to raise in this review. I will promoting the article to GA class. MWright96 (talk)