Talk:1982–83 South-West Indian Ocean cyclone season/GA1
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 03:03, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- Start and end dates for the season if applicable at that time (hey, you ask us that for all our season articles, your turn to add it now, I know there was no season anymore, but until a few months ago, there was). YE Pacific Hurricane 03:03, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- I can't find anything specifically about this season. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:19, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- I'd add that the season is compared to 2010-11 somewhere in the lead. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:03, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- Ehh, but this article is about 82-83, not 10-11. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:19, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- In the SS, add that El Nio events suppress SWIO activity. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:03, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- ENSO has no effect on this basin, see the early 90s for proof.Jason Rees (talk) 01:51, 2 May 2013 (UTC)
- "which formed on Februar 5 northeast of Mauritius." typo. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:16, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- Fixed. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:19, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- Add that the Mauritius weather service names systems. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:16, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- Added. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:19, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- "near Seychelles persisted " wikilink to Seychelles. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:03, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- Mocha. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:19, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- "er a Dvorak rating of 2.5.[1] I" which translates to how many mph?
- Is that relevant? --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:19, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- "On December 1, MFR began issuing warnings on the system,[8] after there was a defined circulation.[1]" I'd switch the order of that sentence. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:03, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- Mocha. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:19, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- Anything from Google Books for Elinah? I found some when I nearly gave it an article. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:03, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- I didn't really find anything worth adding. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:19, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- Why is Severe Tropical Depression a header? Your forgot to revert one of JR's edits that supposedly avoided OR. Infobox says Serve Tropical Storm, we do not live in the past, I happen to agree with you and CB above. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:03, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
- Fixed. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 00:19, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- Link to WMO on ref 2. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:03, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
Otherwise, fantastic job! We need more good SWIO season articles. YE Pacific Hurricane
- Id like to see some consistency between the titles and the infoboxes before this is passed as currently you have the infobox for one saying it is a tropical diosturbance while some are saying severe tropical storms.Jason Rees (talk) 09:01, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- Not sure what you're talking about regarding disturbances. As for STS versus MTS, they're now consistent, based on their classification in MFR archive. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 12:42, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- You had Clara down as a disturbance this morning because of the winds but i fixed it for you after i posted. Anyway you are not consistent with the MFR archive (if its the one i think your meaning) since the only thing they say with regards to classification is a number 1-6, of which number 3 corresponds to a moderate tropical storm or a severe (forte) tropical storm.Jason Rees (talk) 19:06, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- The archive says moderate tropical storm, as does the article. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:22, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- You had Clara down as a disturbance this morning because of the winds but i fixed it for you after i posted. Anyway you are not consistent with the MFR archive (if its the one i think your meaning) since the only thing they say with regards to classification is a number 1-6, of which number 3 corresponds to a moderate tropical storm or a severe (forte) tropical storm.Jason Rees (talk) 19:06, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
- Not sure what you're talking about regarding disturbances. As for STS versus MTS, they're now consistent, based on their classification in MFR archive. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 12:42, 3 May 2013 (UTC)