Talk:2000 Macau Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kaiser matias (talk · contribs) 17:28, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

Will start this shortly. Kaiser matias (talk) 17:28, 1 November 2019 (UTC)

Comments

• "Thirty drivers representing sixteen nationalities were invited to participate by the Macau Grand Prix Committee." Was there any method to the invitations? I'm more curious myself, but if there is a way to note that as well it would be good to include.
  • No further information is available for this unfortunately. MWright96 (talk) 07:06, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

• I feel the history of the Macau Grand Prix (currently the final paragraph of the "Background and entry list" section) would be better moved to the top, as it better flows into the 2000 edition and gives context to everything.

• "Slower traffic delayed Cochet and he lost him seven chances at a full-speed lap on the tight circuit and he took third." A little confused here, mainly due to the "he lost him seven chances..." This all refers to Cochet, yes? If so I would reword it to be clearer: "he lost seven chances..."

• "Collins was the highest-placed British competitor in 15th." Is there a specific reason to single out the top British competitor? I don't see any other nationalities noted like this, so am interested.

Other than the above I don't see anything else. Will be happy to promote after all is addressed. Kaiser matias (talk) 20:09, 9 November 2019 (UTC)

• @Kaiser matias: Have made all of the changes suggested above. MWright96 (talk) 07:06, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Excellent, looks good to me. Kaiser matias (talk) 21:32, 10 November 2019 (UTC)