Talk:2003 Casablanca bombings

Latest comment: 3 months ago by Rollinginhisgrave in topic GA Review

Restaurant

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The restaurent proprietary isn't Italian Jewish, it is Spanish Please correct

Fazazi

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How about adding Mohammed Fazazi to this article. He was preaching in Hamburg at the time some of the 9/11-terrorists (Hamburg cell) attended the al-Quds Mosque. And he is imprisoned in Morocco(?) now, due to his relation to the Casablanca bombings. At least, as far as I understood it. ... Though I read, that he is allowed to stay in contact via mobilephone and snailmail with the rest of the world. JanCK 10:22, 25 September 2007 (UTC)Reply

Motivation for the attack

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From the article "The motive behind the bombings was probably the fact that Morocco had a history of good relationship with Jews". Huh? If Morocco has a history of good relations with Jews, why were they targetted? The above sentence doesn't make any sense as it is; can anyone expand on it? SoulSkorpion (talk) 03:05, 22 November 2007 (UTC)Reply

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Arrested 2000 people

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that doesn't seem right, they couldn't have arrested 2000 people in connection with the bombings — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2.102.184.122 (talk) 16:54, 22 February 2012 (UTC)Reply

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GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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This review is transcluded from Talk:2003 Casablanca bombings/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: NAADAAN (talk · contribs) 22:04, 5 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 02:19, 4 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this on. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 02:19, 4 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

General comments

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I'll be adding things as I go. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 02:37, 4 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Closing this up to due to nominator inactivity. Hopefully these issues can be addressed and it can be renominated, thankyou! Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 02:19, 11 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Prose/content

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Lede

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  • and sites near the Belgian consulate and an old Jewish cemetery The sites were near both the Belgian consulate and an old Jewish cemetery, or there were sites near the consulate and also sites near the cemetery?
  • revendicated Simpler word
  • claiming the lives of WP:EUPHEMISM
  • 33 victims and 12 suicide bombers in the infobox it says 11 attackers were killed.
  • on the spot More clear
  • The attacks came in a rise in radical preachers ungrammatical
  • many of the preachers were veterans of the Soviet-Afghan war non-sequitur
  • led to the terrorist cell's ringleader led to the... capture?
  • after following a radical preacher Bentassir was following the preacher or they were?
  • unclear circumstances -> contested circumstances
  • The attacks shined light idiom
  • with a government initiative fighting against slums reword for clarity
  • after a series of attacks in 2007. clarify who the attacks are on.

Just having gone through the lede, I can see many grammatical issues, and a lack of clarity and colloquial language. Please complete a copyedit of the article before I continue my review of the article, to ensure I am not repeating myself.

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 02:37, 4 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

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