Talk:2010 Cafés do Brasil Indy 300/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:30, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 02:30, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

Images are all appropriately licensed and free. Will go sources and prose tomrrow; would've tonight but the wiki was down and didnt get to it. Wizardman 02:48, 7 September 2019 (UTC)

Sources are good as well, though for the crash.net sources the author name should be added. Prose review to follow. Wizardman 13:11, 8 September 2019 (UTC)

Lead is good, I'll read the rest over the weekend. Sorry for the delay, every time I put a couple hours aside something pops up. Wizardman 20:52, 14 September 2019 (UTC)

Ok, here's what I found prose-wise:

• "Fourth-placed Scott Dixon" since a semicolon precedes it fourth should be lowercase.
• "Afte finishing third" After
• "Weather conditions at the start were clear but mild." clear and mild seem similar to me, so the but seems a bit jarring. am i missing something there?

Only a couple minor things found after a couple read-throughs. Article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 15:55, 15 September 2019 (UTC)

• @Wizardman: Thank you for the review. All of the queries raised above have been actioned and have made some supplementary edits to the article. MWright96 (talk) 16:37, 15 September 2019 (UTC)

Everything looks good, so the article passes. Wizardman 00:20, 16 September 2019 (UTC)