Talk:A Little Red Flower
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:48, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "film directed by Han Yan, who co-wrote the film" film film repetitive.
- "remission due to a" following (rather than due to).
- "as a fellow brain tumor patient" not sure we need to repeat "brain tumor" in the same sentence, or if we do, somehow, do it without repeating.
- Three para lead feels long for an article of this size.
- "idea for the film arrived while" not great English, the idea came about or the idea for the film was conceived when... or something. But not the current wording.
- " a set of films " would that even be a triptych?
- "Production, along with filming began" comma after filming.
- "billion CNY, setting" convert to a currency our readers can commonly associate with, e.g. $, or £ or €.
- "be due to their" because of.
- "a lake that he frequently hallucinates himself and an unknown girl playing at." needs copyedit.
- "an "ordinary" Wei Yihang" what does "ordinary" mean here?
- "a "12 bit 4:4:4 quality image"" what does this mean to non-experts?
- " $39 million" what $?
- "By its second," +weekend
- "its #1 spot" number. Don't use WP:HASH for "number".
- Ref 8 has a spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:40, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: All
Done except the "$39 million" comment which I do not understand. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:46, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
- Is it US$ or some other $? The film isn't American, so I wondered which $ you meant. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 06:40, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
