Talk:A Simple Lie

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Some Dude From North Carolina in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 1 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:46, 1 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • Don't use small font in the infobox per WP:SMALLFONT.  Done
  • Lead summarizes the entire article and is in great shape.  

Plot

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  • Add a comma after "death threats".
  • "talks sense Frieda" → "talks sense to Frieda"  Done
  • "check the hospital security" → "check the hospital for security"  Done
  • "person taking" → "person from taking"  Done
  • Get each part of the summary to 400 words each (first is at 411 and second at 417).  Done

Production

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  • "Steele told a Victoria" → "Steele told Victoria"  Done
  • "appear the show" → "appear on the show"  Done

Promotion and broadcast

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  • Add commas after "However" and "the following days".  Done
  • "described as the move" → "described the move"  Done

Reception

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  • This section looks good.

References

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  • References are archived.  

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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