Talk:A Town Called Mercy/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:53, 2 October 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• Link science fiction
• The episode's plot section is too big as per WP:TVPLOT
• Add alt text to the images
• "most of it was done by his stuntman" huh?
• For ref. 24, can you make a note as to where this information is located

On hold until the above issues are addressed. TBrandley 18:01, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

• added alt to infobox, could not make it work on theme park images. The paremeters are different.REVUpminster (talk) 20:57, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
  • As far as I know, alt text is only required for FA-level (hence why there is no tool to the right). I'll see what I can do about the plot when I get the chance; right now it seems about average length and I'm not sure what can be cut out. I've done the other changes above. Glimmer721 ^talk 01:25, 10 October 2012 (UTC)
    • I've gone back over the plot, and I really can't cut much more out. It should be about average length compared with other TV articles. Maybe the reason for extra word count is that two characters are "the Doctor" and "the Gunslinger" rather than a one-word name? Glimmer721 ^talk 22:42, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

Looks good now. Passing. TBrandley 02:47, 18 October 2012 (UTC)