Talk:Adrianus Djajasepoetra/GA1

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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 10:08, 24 September 2013 (UTC)

• Speedy fail - This article is nowhere near comprehensive enough for GA; just check out the number of books out there, including histories of the Jakarta Cathedral, which have information on the individual. Grammar and spelling is a mess; the odd insistence on using the improper spelling Djokdjakarta really stands out. The image is also a copyvio. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:08, 24 September 2013 (UTC)

Is Cipinang Penitentiary Institution the fortress ? Victuallers (talk) 18:58, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

• I'm sorry for my fundamental misunderstanding of the word "fortress". I was considered fortress as prison at the first time, but then I know it's not a fortress, it's a top-security prison. Thank you. Bernardino Rakha (talk) 14:35, 4 November 2013 (UTC)