Talk:Albrecht Kossel
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Jarhed in topic Close paraphrasing
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Close paraphrasing
editArticle seems to have texted lifted from this oft-cited source, as shown by the duplication detector report. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:50, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
- I have reviewed the report and all instances look ok to my inexperienced eyes. The source and the article are, after all, about the same subject.Jarhed (talk) 22:00, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
- The citation is indeed an excellent one and this article is shot through with references to it.Jarhed (talk) 22:02, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
- It's not quite set in stone, but stuff like "young their son walther was born in 1888 and their daughter gertrude in 1889" (which is in both texts) should be rephrased, perhaps "... young. Walther, their son, was born in 1888, followed in 1889 by their daughter Gertrude." Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:30, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
- I made this plus some other changes, please review.Jarhed (talk) 04:17, 30 August 2011 (UTC)
- It's not quite set in stone, but stuff like "young their son walther was born in 1888 and their daughter gertrude in 1889" (which is in both texts) should be rephrased, perhaps "... young. Walther, their son, was born in 1888, followed in 1889 by their daughter Gertrude." Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:30, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
After fixing the reported issues and no further review, I removed the template.Jarhed (talk) 22:53, 6 October 2011 (UTC)