Talk:American Arts Commemorative Series medallions/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 12:14, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: One found, denticle and unlinked as I think neither Dermal denticle nor Pulp stone are meant here. Is this in fact the correct word? Jezhotwells (talk) 12:19, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

Linkrot: None found. Jezhotwells (talk) 12:21, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   The medallions were initially sold through mail order by obtaining that day's price by telephone Rather clumsy, can this be re-phrased?

   Beginning in 1982, denticles, reeding and a statement of gold content and national origin were added to the medallions. As noted above in the disambiguations section, denticles needs explanation as there is no suitable Wikipedia target. Suggest a suitable paraphrase of this source.

   Otherwise prose is fine, the lead is short but I believe that it adequately summarises the article.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   References are RS, and those that are on-line support the statements, assume good faith for others, no evidence of OR

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   Covers the subject in sufficent detail, no unnecessary trivia.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   NPOV

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   Stable

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   Licensed and captioned.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   On hold for seven days for these issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 12:37, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

   Ok, this is good to go, so I am happy to list. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk) 14:22, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for the review! I've fixed the problems you noted above. Rewording the mail order part was a little trickly, but I think it reads a lot better now. Thanks again!-RHM22 (talk) 14:10, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

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