Talk:Andy Gibler

Latest comment: 1 year ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 09:55, 22 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Notes

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  • Addes Renegades players cat
  • "In 1980, Gibler became the team's starting tight end," the prior paragraph said he was already named the starter. Was he starting due to injury? Did you see anything?
    • Changed to "remained starter" - does that work?
  • Suggest renaming external links to Further reading.
    • Done.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 10:03, 22 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:02, 24 October 2023 (UTC)Reply