Talk:Angélique Duchemin

Latest comment: 2 months ago by Rollinginhisgrave in topic GA Review

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So, what did she look like?

How about a photo or picture? 2600:8800:784:8F00:C23F:D5FF:FEC4:D51D (talk) 03:46, 16 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Nominator: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 17:56, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 09:38, 21 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Easy one, nice and quick. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 09:38, 21 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Prose and content

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  • and became World the World per false titles
  • It would be good to include that she was born in Thuir in the Early life section, so the claim has an inline cite and the infobox can more effectively be a summary of the body.
  • Why do you include her mother's surname but not her fathers? The source does not mention her mother's surname.
  • Her brother also took up boxing brothers
  • age of 7 seven MOS:NUMBERS (not GA requirement)
  • (nitpicky) begin In 2012 she with Duchemin since it's the start of a new paragraph (not GA requirement)
  • title with a unanimous decision in a unanimous ?
  • just call cardiac massage CPR.
  • seemingly of a pulmonary embolism I don't think this is necessary information given you immediately correct it, and it just seems to be proseline information.
  • Her father had died after a heart attack in 2013,[7] experienced while he was painting boxing ring posts. died from a heart attack, don't need the word experienced or the comma.
  • Duchemin during a boxing bout don't need a caption for this image

Other

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  • Sources checked  Y (checked as I went through)
  • Images  Y fair use, low quality
  • Stable  Y
  • Neutral  Y
  • Broad / summary style  Y
  • No OR/COPYVIO  Y 13% Earwig, no issues

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 09:38, 21 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Many thanks, Rollinginhisgrave. I've acted on your comments. Please let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:54, 30 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
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