Talk:Angélique Duchemin/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 17:56, 26 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 09:38, 21 August 2024 (UTC)

Easy one, nice and quick. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 09:38, 21 August 2024 (UTC)

Prose and content

• and became World the World per false titles
• It would be good to include that she was born in Thuir in the Early life section, so the claim has an inline cite and the infobox can more effectively be a summary of the body.
• Why do you include her mother's surname but not her fathers? The source does not mention her mother's surname.

• Added an obituary. Not the best source but hopefully OK with the other source used. If not, I can remove the surname. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:53, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

• Her brother also took up boxing brothers
• age of 7 seven MOS:NUMBERS (not GA requirement)
• (nitpicky) begin In 2012 she with Duchemin since it's the start of a new paragraph (not GA requirement)
• title with a unanimous decision in a unanimous ?
• just call cardiac massage CPR.
• seemingly of a pulmonary embolism I don't think this is necessary information given you immediately correct it, and it just seems to be proseline information.
• Her father had died after a heart attack in 2013,[7] experienced while he was painting boxing ring posts. died from a heart attack, don't need the word experienced or the comma.
• Duchemin during a boxing bout don't need a caption for this image

Other

• Sources checked Y (checked as I went through)
• Images Y fair use, low quality
• Stable Y
• Neutral Y
• Broad / summary style Y
• No OR/COPYVIO Y 13% Earwig, no issues

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 09:38, 21 August 2024 (UTC)

Many thanks, Rollinginhisgrave. I've acted on your comments. Please let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:54, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

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