Talk:Angry Andy

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 22:44, 4 September 2012 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Pass!

Comments

Everything is good, nothing needs to be fixed.--Dom497 (talk) 23:57, 5 September 2012 (UTC)

Screenshot

The image needs to have a solid rationale in order not to get deleted; it can't be just for decorative purposes. This includes both the template on the page and the image in the infobox. The fact that both are required was brought up during a Deletion Submission for an X-Files episode earlier and I was told to add why the image is necessary to both the template and the infobox. You can see the discussion here. I try to add a rationale to all my articles I work on. Please stop reverting this.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 02:41, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

But this has nothing to do with the screenshot! It would be more appropriate to say something to the affect of "this episode brought back Andy's anger issues that were first explored upon the character's introduction." or something that isn't basically an opinion. Saying reviews were critical of the scene doesn't help readers looking at the screenshot. If they want to know what critics thought of the episode, they can go to the reception section. A reader looking at the screenshot would want to know what it is of, and why is was important to the episode. Andy punching the wall and his actions because of it are why he got fired, which was what the whole episode was building up to. That's why the screenshot is important, its represents a turning point for the season and the series as a whole. Not because "many critics" didn't like it.Caringtype1 (talk) 19:18, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

OK, I can get behind that. Check out Wikipedia:Non-free content criteria, and look at Number 8, "Contextual Significance". It says "Non-free content is used only if its presence would significantly increase readers' understanding of the topic, and its omission would be detrimental to that understanding." As of right now, it's just a dude punching a hole in a wall, which is easy to explain in text. I'll add what you suggested, and then it will have some contextual and visual significance for staying. I hope you don't take this as "Nu-uh! I'm right." I just don't want the pic to get deleted.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:36, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

Ok, thanks I think it is much better now.Caringtype1 (talk) 19:43, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

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