Talk:Arcadia (The X-Files)
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Glimmer721 (talk · contribs) 23:35, 6 March 2012 (UTC)
Hello, I will review this soon. Glimmer721 talk 23:35, 6 March 2012 (UTC)
Comments:
- Not sure about "largely" positive, as only three reviews are quoted and the wording is tetering on POV
- Explain that Nancy is Dave's wife
- Explain who Mulder and Scully are in the plot (e.g. FBI speical agents Fox Mulder and Dana Scully...)
- Watch contractions: isn't, doesn't
- Is there a wikilink for HOA? Homeowners' association, I assume?
- "The creature attacks Gogolak and, as he dies, the it disintegrates into dirt." Remove bolded word
- Link Daniel Arkin in the production section
- What are "CC and Rs"? (Or is there at least a link for it?)
- "He explained that, "they..." No comma after "that"
- Refs 6 and 7 need publishing dates.
Placing on hold for 7 days while issues are addressed. Glimmer721 talk 01:33, 7 March 2012 (UTC)
- Alright, I believe I've fixed everything!--Gen. Quon (talk) 06:00, 7 March 2012 (UTC)