Talk:Armenia–Serbia relations/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Coemgenus in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 11:48, 14 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

I'll review this one over the next few days. --Coemgenus (talk) 11:48, 14 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

Checklist

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Comments

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Some initial comments
  • Stability and images look good.
  • On references, some of your short cites don't actually link to long cites.
Lede
  • Looks good, but the first sentence is a little awkward. I'll try to figure out a better option.
History
  • "After the Ottomans conquered Belgrade, they destroyed the city's Armenian and Jewish cemeteries." This could use a citation.

@AnulBanul: I see you haven't edited in a while. Are you still active? If not, we should close this nomination and reopen when you return to active editing. --Coemgenus (talk) 11:30, 21 August 2015 (UTC) After 7 days without response from the nominator (or any eidts by him whatsoever,) I'll have to fail this. It's not bad though, and I'd encourage renomination later on. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:29, 23 August 2015 (UTC)Reply