Hi Gog. If possible con you have a look on this draft? It is almost completed and need copy editing and paraphrasing. Feel free to do necessary changes in it. If you are busy with another stuff, It's ok. Thanks. Gazal world (talk) 16:12, 8 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
- Hi Gazal world. I am a bit busy, but I squeezed in a rapid look at it. It seemed to be in good shape - I didn't need to do too much. Gog the Mild (talk) 16:48, 8 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
- @Gog the Mild: Hi Gog. Is this a 'B' class or 'C' class article ? -Gazal world (talk) 15:45, 27 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
- IMHO it is C class. For B I would want to see a little more in the lead; currently it has nothing from the last four sections. Also, the lead states "Its publication was prevented for many years by his family members and friends because it contains explicit details of his extramarital relations and controversial views on morals", but this is not covered in the main article. Having the contents section expanded would be good, but is not IMO essential for B class. Gog the Mild (talk) 19:50, 27 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
- OK, Gog. I will work more on the points you suggested. -Gazal world (talk) 20:00, 27 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
- Now, Gog ? -Gazal world (talk) 11:04, 20 February 2019 (UTC)Reply
- It is looking good. If note a had a citation it would easily be B class. Gog the Mild (talk) 13:30, 21 February 2019 (UTC)Reply
- Citation added in note. Reassessed.-Nizil (talk) 07:32, 22 February 2019 (UTC)Reply
