Talk:Auditory imagery

Streamline

This article needs to be streamlined and broken down for nonspecialists. The main problem is the giant chunk of journal text dumped in the middle. I haven't deleted it, because a more qualified editor may be able to trim some useful stuff out of it, but it needs a look... --Dvyost 07:16, 31 October 2005 (UTC)

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From Biosthmors

"Studies developed by Janata and Paroo show" is unnecessary in my opinion. Wikipedia always cares about the facts, not always the who/why/when of those facts, unless we're going to have a history section, for example. Biosthmors (talk) 21:05, 14 November 2012 (UTC)

"Sing through “Jingle Bells” in your head and tell me" is not an encyclopedic tone. It sounds like the author of the article could be telling the reader to do something and asking for the reader to tell the author something. Biosthmors (talk) 21:07, 14 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for your work on this Imran. See WP:HEADINGS for ways to fix up that formatting. More comments to come. Biosthmors (talk) 22:07, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

I see earworm is in the WP:See also section despite being in the body. It can be removed. Biosthmors (talk) 22:09, 26 November 2012 (UTC)

Why is motor imagery linked but not visual imagery? Red links are OK.

Consider removing the subheadings of "Tempo", "Pitch", "Verbal", and "Loudness". Just because it may go on an outline, doesn't necessarily mean readers need to see a subheading title.

See WP:REFSPACE for examples on where exactly to consistently place the references.

Why are the sources of "Communications, A. U. (2012). Involuntary Musical Imagery (earworms) - research by Lassi Liikkanen, Aalto University. aaltouniversity, from http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gc5my6Lfipo" and "Liikkanen, L. A. New Directions for Understanding Involuntary Musical Imagery" reliable? Does this person publish in peer-reviewed literature (see WP:SPS)? I don't see the name cited to any other source in the article. Are you citing an interview? Thanks for your work! Biosthmors (talk) 05:37, 27 November 2012 (UTC)

And I don't quite grasp the first sentence/definition of the article. I think it should be made more accessible. I am tired though! Biosthmors (talk) 05:38, 27 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Biosthmors I appreciate the feedback! - User:Imran Naim

Pitch

I was reading the pitch section with made a claim that "Auditory image pitch detection studies have shown that response time increases when judging two high pitches as opposed to judging two low pitches.[2]" This directly contradicted an academic journal I was in the middle of reading. So I checked out the linked source and it said the the same thing as the source I was reading and not what the wikipedia article says. I don't know how to best edit this or if I'm missing something so I'm leaving that to someone else. Any here is the source I was talking about: Intons-Peterson, M. J., Russell, W., & Dressel, S. (1992). The role of pitch in auditory imagery. Journal Of Experimental Psychology: Human Perception And Performance, 18(1), 233-240. 50.158.213.213 (talk) 04:44, 5 December 2013 (UTC)

Thank you 50.158.213.213 for your comment, and you're absolutely right. I fixed it. However, I would like to encourage you to be bold next time you find a mistake. Worst thing that can happen is that another editor reverts your edit, and well, that happens every now and again to all of us... Friendly regards! Lova Falk talk 10:45, 21 December 2013 (UTC)

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