Talk:Babel One

Re-worded

I re worded the plot outline for the episode, since the first words were 'The Romulans attack...' and it was kind of a spoiler (which I know doesn't go against wiki policy) but it was also not in chronological order, and it was very short, I added a little detail to it. Tydamann (talk) 12:00, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 22:57, 29 December 2013 (UTC)

I was about to review this before, but then you withdrew it, so now it's back, and I'm not missing my chance! Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 22:57, 29 December 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for taking the time to review it. The only major change I did to it was to expand the reception section (using the same two reviews), but in the meanwhile they also annouced the publication date of the season four Blu-Ray, so I added that as well. Miyagawa (talk) 13:15, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

OK, here goes:

• The guest star thing in the infobox lists a few who aren't mentioned in the article elsewhere. Consider noting their appearance in the Production section.

• What I normally do is to cite the guest star list in the infobox - for some reason although my browser says that I opened the Radio Times site for this episode before, I never added the cite. I also removed one of the actors from the list as it wasn't included in the source. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

• "Filming ran on a seven-day schedule, which started on November 2, 2004 and ran until November 10th." Couldn't this just be shortened to "Filming began on November 2, 2004 and lasted until November 10."?

• Much better! Changed as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

• "Jamahl Epsicokhan at his website Jammer's Reviews," drop the comma

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

• Blu ray should be Blu-ray

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

• "The Blu ray release of the final season of Enterprise is due on April 1, 2014.[8]" you haven't specified the fourth season is the final - could potentially be confusing

• Changed to fourth season. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 00:49, 31 December 2013 (UTC)`

• Going to have to hold up my hand and admit a mistake, mainly because I've fixed it now. I got Lee Arenberg mixed up with Aron Eisenberg. I had said that Arenberg played Nog, but it was actually Eisenberg. Arenberg played a bunch of other Ferengi as supported by the source (and I've now changed to reflect the source). I must have read Ferengi and Arenberg and thought Eisenberg. But it's all sorted now. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

Since the concerns are addressed I'm passing this. Stepping in since Taylor noted in another review that his connection/activity has been iffy of late. Wizardman 04:10, 27 January 2014 (UTC)

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Merge with "United" and "The Aenar"

I propose to merge Babel One with United and The Aenar.

"Storm Front" and "Storm Front, Part II" are two-parts that are both discussed in a single page Storm Front so why don't we have that when it's a three-part story? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lunchmeets (talk • contribs) 20:36, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Merging two episodes into a single article frequently causes some minor awkward issues, and the repetition and overlap makes things less clear to readers. If it is to avoid a deletion then one merged article is better than no article at all, but unless they were originally presented as a double episode I wouldn't recommend it. There are some articles I would like to see improved and expanded and split back out into two separate articles. (eg In a Mirror, Darkly, The Best of Both Worlds (Star Trek: The Next Generation) for starters.) Also even if editors agree to the merge, someone still needs to have enough enthusiasm do the work to improve the merged article, which I'm relieved to see did not happen here. -- 109.76.206.80 (talk) 13:00, 7 November 2021 (UTC)

Drone ship

I was watching reruns and noticed the derelict ship from The Fight (Star Trek: Voyager) looked familiar. It is a fairly distinct design and resembles a giant flea. Turns out it was later repurposed as the drone ship in this arc of episodes, minor adjustments were made including adding the many antennas.[1] I'm just adding a quick note now as a reminder for when I eventually come back around to this article but it shouldn't be too difficult to find reliable sources and add Production details about the ship to this article. -- 109.76.206.80 (talk) 13:00, 7 November 2021 (UTC)