Talk:Babel One/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 22:57, 29 December 2013 (UTC)

I was about to review this before, but then you withdrew it, so now it's back, and I'm not missing my chance! Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 22:57, 29 December 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for taking the time to review it. The only major change I did to it was to expand the reception section (using the same two reviews), but in the meanwhile they also annouced the publication date of the season four Blu-Ray, so I added that as well. Miyagawa (talk) 13:15, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

OK, here goes:

• The guest star thing in the infobox lists a few who aren't mentioned in the article elsewhere. Consider noting their appearance in the Production section.

• What I normally do is to cite the guest star list in the infobox - for some reason although my browser says that I opened the Radio Times site for this episode before, I never added the cite. I also removed one of the actors from the list as it wasn't included in the source. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

• "Filming ran on a seven-day schedule, which started on November 2, 2004 and ran until November 10th." Couldn't this just be shortened to "Filming began on November 2, 2004 and lasted until November 10."?

• Much better! Changed as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

• "Jamahl Epsicokhan at his website Jammer's Reviews," drop the comma

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

• Blu ray should be Blu-ray

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

• "The Blu ray release of the final season of Enterprise is due on April 1, 2014.[8]" you haven't specified the fourth season is the final - could potentially be confusing

• Changed to fourth season. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 00:49, 31 December 2013 (UTC)`

• Going to have to hold up my hand and admit a mistake, mainly because I've fixed it now. I got Lee Arenberg mixed up with Aron Eisenberg. I had said that Arenberg played Nog, but it was actually Eisenberg. Arenberg played a bunch of other Ferengi as supported by the source (and I've now changed to reflect the source). I must have read Ferengi and Arenberg and thought Eisenberg. But it's all sorted now. Miyagawa (talk) 17:53, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

Since the concerns are addressed I'm passing this. Stepping in since Taylor noted in another review that his connection/activity has been iffy of late. Wizardman 04:10, 27 January 2014 (UTC)