Talk:Badami cave temples/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 23:01, 29 February 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I'll review this article. FunkMonk (talk) 23:01, 29 February 2016 (UTC)

• The article seems a bit heavy on images, perhaps the less professional looking photos, such as the one captioned "Vishnu Badami Caves" could be cut?
  • Yes, I agree there are too mnay of them. I have removed the img captioned "Vishnu Badami Caves" and also another double img.
• There are several paragraphs that end without citations, such as "There is also a fifth natural cave temple in Badami, a Buddhist temple, a natural cave that can only be entered by crouching on all fours." Needs to be checked throughout.
  • Sorry about it. I have now fixed references at end of all unreferenced paragraphs

• FunkMonk Thanks for starting the review. I have complied to the above two observations. I will be glad to comply with any more review observations.Nvvchar. 13:31, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

• @FunkMonk: Thank you for the comments. @Nvvchar requested me to address some of the review comments, I will help. (MSW) Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 23:59, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

• It seems the intro could be a tad bit longer, relative to the overall size of the article.
  • Lead has been expanded - Nvv
• There is room for coordinates in the infobox, so not sure why they're hanging at the top right of the article.

• This is a template feature, standardized for wikipedia articles. I don't know if there is a way to move it into the infobox. Found a way. Fixed. - MSW

• "in the 6th century the capital of Chalukya dynasty" I'd out "in the 6th century" last.

• Done by @Nvvchar. - MSW

• "Epigraphy in Kannada language" The Kannada language?

• Yes. Fixed. - MSW

• In the geography section, you mention which religions and gods each cave is devoted to, but is that really relevant there? Shouldn't it be relegated to the later sections?

• Agreed. Fixed. - MSW

• Some words are only linked in the intro, but should also be linked in the article body.

• Done partly by @Nvvchar, partly by me. - MSW

• "identified in the town of Badami‍" What is meant by identified in?

• Fixed by @Nvvchar. - MSW

• "The Badami caves complex are part of" Is part of, complex is singular.

• Fixed by @Nvvchar. - MSW

• "of yantra-chakra motifs" Could be explained in parenthesis what this means.

• Done. - MSW

• "The Badami cave temples are composed of four caves, all carved out of soft Badami sandstone on a hill cliff, dated to the late 6th to 7th centuries." Isn't much of this already mentioned in the history section? Perhaps it should be merged with the earlier text.

• Indeed. Merged "6th to 7th..." part into history, deleted from Temple caves description section. - MSW

• "The cave temples are dated to the 6th to 8th centuries,[20] with an inscription dated to 579–CE.[21] The inscriptions are in old Kannada script." As above. Though you give a different range of dates for each time you mention dates...

• Fixed. The date confusion is from dating of individual caves versus dating range for all caves. - MSW

• "The cave is about 59 feet (18 m)" You should name the cave (cave 1), as you do in the sections below.

• Fixed by @Nvvchar. - MSW

• "with bovine and equine heads" Animal terms could be linked.

• Done. - MSW

• You should explain who Alice Boner is at first mention.

• Done by @Nvvchar, checked by me. - MSW

• "multi-headed snake (Nag)" Any relation to Nāga? If so, link?

• Indeed. It is related. Fixed. - MSW

• Are the caves still used for worship? Do they have any religious importance today?

• For now, we don't have WP:RS to include a verifiable statement either way. - MSW

• "he culture and clothing embedded in the" Embedded culture? Not sure what this means.

• Deleted embedded. Reworded. - MSW

• "In 2013, Manjunath Sullolli reported" Which is who?

• Fixed by @Nvvchar. - MSW

• "On the back part of this," Since this is a new paragraph, it is unclear what "this" refers to.

• Fixed by @Nvvchar. - MSW

• "it is surrounded on the north and south by forts built in later times." There should be no unique info int he intro.

• Agreed. Trimmed. - MSW

• Not sure from reading the article, but are the caves themselves entirely man-made, or mainly the various decorations? Could be made clearer.

• Done. - MSW

• "it is now damaged and missing parts." Why?

• The reasons are unclear, and there is a lack of WP:RS to add something. - MSW

• "According to Shetti" Which is who?

• Added, with source. - MSW

• "such as one by John Murray" Who?

• Added, with source. - MSW

• "by Henry Cousens and A. Sundara"? Who? always remember to present the people mention, we need to know at least their occupation.

• Fixed by @Nvvchar. - MSW

• "According to Bolon" Who?

• Added by @Nvvchar, expanded by me. - MSW

• "Cave 5 is a Buddhist cave that has been converted into a Hindu temple to Vishnu." Why so certain in the intro, when the article itself isn't?

• Agreed. Trimmed. - MSW

• "described the pioneering designs" Only described as such in the intro.

• Fixed. - MSW

• @Nvvchar: I have addressed or verified your recent edits. I have also trimmed and copyedited the expanded lead, which as @FunkMonk states should neither contain new information nor state something different than what the main article with its sources states. If I missed something, or made something worse, please revert/revise/correct. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 00:52, 4 March 2016 (UTC)

• FunkMonk Please see all the replies of compliance. Coauthor of the article User:Ms Sarah Welch has also addressed some of the issues. We hope all our corrections and replies are in order. Thanks. Nvvchar. 02:28, 4 March 2016 (UTC)

• Great, all looks good to me, so will pass now. FunkMonk (talk) 21:17, 4 March 2016 (UTC)

• FunkMonk. Than you very much. Due to a some problem the Bot does not leave a message of GA review on my talk page. Can I request you to leave message on our talk pages of this GA approval?Nvvchar. 01:43, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

Not sure how this is supposed to be done manually, though? FunkMonk (talk) 10:34, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

It doesn't need to be done manually, FunkMonk. The notification by bot is a courtesy, and frequently goes astray for various reasons (in this case because Nvvchar doesn't include both user and talk page addresses in his sig, and in that order, so the bot doesn't have an address it can work with). Since Nvvchar already knows that the nomination passed, there's no need for a courtesy message. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:47, 5 March 2016 (UTC)